MIKEL: TEAM ANTHEM

I have chosen this anthem because it belongs to a historical football team

I have chosen this anthem because I agree with the message that the anthem sends

I have chosen this anthem because it links to the happyiness that has this team 

Tottenham are the greatest football team that the world has ever seen!

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IBON: TEAM FLAG

The red colour is associated a with the livestock rasing, because they are animals.

The green colour is associated a with the montains, becaus they are a lot of.

And the blue colour is associated a with the sea.

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MATCH RESULT
 

LARRAUL UNITED 13 - 26 VILLABONA CITY
 

 

Villabona City wins 3 points in the general classification.

 

Daniel is in the first place for winning the Golden Ball.
 

 

 

Other not so positive comments about the other football players:

• Asier: You should finish the "Team Anthem" activity for next week
 
• Ibon: You should finish the "Team Flag" and "Team Anthem" activities for next week

• Mikel: You should finish the "Team Anthem" activity for next week

DANIEL: TEAM ANTHEM

I have chosen this song beacuse I agree with the philosophy of the team.
I have chosen this song because I associate it with a catchy (wow!) song.
I have chosen this song because I link it to the great fans that this team has got.

I have chosen these three adjectives for this song: success, happiness and humble.

Cuz United are the greatest football team!!!!!! 

20 POINTS

You have perfectly understood the objective of this activity and you have done it just after our class! Congratulations!

IBON: HALLOWEEN LETTER (2)

Hi Julen,

I celebrated the Halloween in London on October 31 which with my friends. We put the Jack-o-lanterns in the house of the London. I costumed with a skeleton and we went to ask the  for candies.

We asked the for candy in the  some houses and I has had a lot of candies. In the garden one grup of the boys played of a game called "bobbing of apples".

We continued saying the "trick or treat" and on a one house we  they didn´t give us candies and we put angry and we started throwing eggs to his home.

Laiter we went with  to our house or  in the London and we played on "bobbing for apples"

Hope to hear from you soon

Take care,

Ibon

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THANK YOU FOR YOUR SECOND EFFORT

DANIEL: TEAM FLAG

I have chosen the white colour because i I associated IT with the peaceful of the world

I have chosen the red colour because i I associated IT with a cooperative team work

I have chosen the green colour becausei I associated IT with the environment

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ASIER: TEAM FLAG

The green colour is associated with the nature that there is in my town, because there are a lot of montains, trees, flowers...

The white colour refers to the peace taht there is in my town, because there aren´t a lot of cars, there isn´t any factory...

The blue colour is linked to the quiet silence and freshness is of the town

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MIKEL: TEAM FLAG

I have chosen those  these colours (which colour?) because it refers to the spirit of the team. 

I have chosen those  these colours  (which colour?) because it escapes from the pessimism and it gives more energy to the team.

I have chosen those  these colours (which colour?) because it fights with three elements. (which elements?)

15 POINTS

ASIER: HALLOWEEN LETTER

Hi Julen, 

I didn´t go to the football training on october 31st because i I stayed in Londres in  for halloween. (Halloween is not a place, is it?) I stayed in my grandparents house. We putted (put-put-put) a lot of Jack-o-lanterns all around the house and we bought a lot of candys candies to gave  give for to the children. 

At night children with ideous faces came to our house and said trick or treat. We always said treat but when the all candys were finished we said trick and the children started to broke break all the Jack-o-lanterns. 

Suddenly our house became a haunted house and ghosts,skeletons,witches... appeared in our house. We heared shieking and howling sounds, it was very horrifled horrifying and i suffered a gruesome ________. (gruesome what?) Do you like my day in Londres?

Hope to hear from you soon
Take care, 
Asier 

MR.SANZ COMMENTS

You should improve...

• Tenses of the letter. If you are writing about a story in the past, you should use the Past Simple

You should learn...

• gruesome / ˈɡruːsəm/ adjetivo 
  truculento, horripilante
• gruesome / ˈɡruːsəm/ adjetivo 
  truculento, horripilante

  II	vtr fig disfrazar [as, de]: he was dressed up as Napoleon, iba disfrazado de Napoleón

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CONGRATULATIONS!

MIKEL: HALLOWEEN LETTER

Hi Mr. Sanz:

I'm Mikel and I have to tell you what happened the last 31 of october.

It was Halloween and I was at home. Some children rang the bell of my house and I opened the door. They were wearing some costumes. A boy was wearing a ghoul costume and a girl one of an evil witch.
They said "trick or treat" and I tell told them trick. They said ok OK and they left my house. I was going to the bed, when I heard a cackling sound, and I think thought that there was nothing, but when I saw the door it was my mum that was possessed. I get  got very horrorified. It was a jouke of the two children. Next day I got up with a howling sound. It was my mobile phone, because I put the alarm.

I want to see you soon. 
Take care.
Mikel 

MR.SANZ COMMENTS

You should improve...

• Tenses of the letter. If you are writing about a story in the past, you should use the Past Simple

20 POINTS. 

INCREDIBLE STORY MIKEL! CONTINUE LIKE THAT!

IBON: HALLOWEEN LETTER

Hi Julen,

I celebrated the Halloween on October 31 which with my friends and i I costume dressed up as with a skeleton.

Later they (they or we?) go went to cut the pumpkins on the garden called "Jack-o-lanterns".

Laiter to finish to cut the pumpkins they going to ask the candy and say the "trick or treat" and one famili they didn´t give a candy. (Non-sense structure, although I know what you want to say, it's impossible to understand this sentence. You should try with shorter sentences)

Later, we finished cutting the pumpkins. We went to ask for candy to a house. We said "trick or treat" to one family, but they didn't give us any candy.

MR.SANZ COMMENTS

You should improve...

• Tenses of the letter. If you are writing about a story in the past, you should use the Past Simple

You should learn...

• costume / ˈkɑːstuːm / || / ˈkɒstjuːm/ sustantivo
  1. uncountable (style of dress) traje m;
     (for parties, disguise) disfraz m;
     in ~ disfrazado
• dress up 
  

  I	verbo intransitivo 1   disfrazarse [as, de] 2   vestirse elegantemente
  II	vtr fig disfrazar [as, de]: he was dressed up as Napoleon, iba disfrazado de Napoleón

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YOU SHOULD MAKE ANOTHER TRY WITH THIS ESSAY

DANIEL: HALLOWEEN LETTER

Hi Mr.Sanz,

I'm writing to you to say why is Halloween Halloween is a great day for me.

I really like it, beacause when I was young I usually read horrified horrifying istories and I loved all of the characters of  related to this topic like such as, monsters, skeletons, witches, goblins, warlocks and also the famous pumpkins. (Can pumpkins be famous?)

In these istories always appeared wicked witches, possessed girls or childs  children or haunted houses with hideous monsters inside of it. These istories were so great!

So, I want to know if you want to come with me on this Halloween to have a great time doing trick or treat and in the end doing a costume party with all of my friends.

I hope you to liked my letter, so answer as fast as you can telling me what means Halloween Halloween means for you and if you want to come to the party.

See you soon,
DANI

MR.SANZ COMMENTS

You should improve...

• Question structures vS Simple sentence structures
• Why is Halloween a great day for me?
• I would like to know why Halloween is a great day for me

You should learn...

• horrifying / ˈhɔːrəfaɪɪŋ/ adjetivo 
  horroroso, horrendo
• horrify / ˈhɔːrəfaɪ / ||/ ˈhɒrɪfaɪ/ verbo transitivo -fies, -fying, -fied horrorizar^(conj.⇒) ;
  she was horrified to find out that … se horrorizó al enterarse de que …
• child /tʃaɪld/ sustantivo (pl children / ˈtʃɪldrən/ )

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