IBON: HALLOWEEN LETTER

Hi Julen,

I celebrated the Halloween on October 31 which with my friends and i I costume dressed up as with a skeleton.

Later they (they or we?) go went to cut the pumpkins on the garden called "Jack-o-lanterns".

Laiter to finish to cut the pumpkins they going to ask the candy and say the "trick or treat" and one famili they didn´t give a candy. (Non-sense structure, although I know what you want to say, it's impossible to understand this sentence. You should try with shorter sentences)

Later, we finished cutting the pumpkins. We went to ask for candy to a house. We said "trick or treat" to one family, but they didn't give us any candy.

MR.SANZ COMMENTS

You should improve...

• Tenses of the letter. If you are writing about a story in the past, you should use the Past Simple

You should learn...

• costume / ˈkɑːstuːm / || / ˈkɒstjuːm/ sustantivo
  1. uncountable (style of dress) traje m;
     (for parties, disguise) disfraz m;
     in ~ disfrazado
• dress up 
  

  I	verbo intransitivo 1   disfrazarse [as, de] 2   vestirse elegantemente
  II	vtr fig disfrazar [as, de]: he was dressed up as Napoleon, iba disfrazado de Napoleón

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