MIKEL: HALLOWEEN LETTER

Hi Mr. Sanz:

I'm Mikel and I have to tell you what happened the last 31 of october.

It was Halloween and I was at home. Some children rang the bell of my house and I opened the door. They were wearing some costumes. A boy was wearing a ghoul costume and a girl one of an evil witch.
They said "trick or treat" and I tell told them trick. They said ok OK and they left my house. I was going to the bed, when I heard a cackling sound, and I think thought that there was nothing, but when I saw the door it was my mum that was possessed. I get  got very horrorified. It was a jouke of the two children. Next day I got up with a howling sound. It was my mobile phone, because I put the alarm.

I want to see you soon. 
Take care.
Mikel 

MR.SANZ COMMENTS

You should improve...

• Tenses of the letter. If you are writing about a story in the past, you should use the Past Simple

20 POINTS. 

INCREDIBLE STORY MIKEL! CONTINUE LIKE THAT!