DANIEL: HALLOWEEN LETTER

Hi Mr.Sanz,

I'm writing to you to say why is Halloween Halloween is a great day for me.

I really like it, beacause when I was young I usually read horrified horrifying istories and I loved all of the characters of  related to this topic like such as, monsters, skeletons, witches, goblins, warlocks and also the famous pumpkins. (Can pumpkins be famous?)

In these istories always appeared wicked witches, possessed girls or childs  children or haunted houses with hideous monsters inside of it. These istories were so great!

So, I want to know if you want to come with me on this Halloween to have a great time doing trick or treat and in the end doing a costume party with all of my friends.

I hope you to liked my letter, so answer as fast as you can telling me what means Halloween Halloween means for you and if you want to come to the party.

See you soon,
DANI

MR.SANZ COMMENTS

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• Question structures vS Simple sentence structures
• Why is Halloween a great day for me?
• I would like to know why Halloween is a great day for me

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• horrifying / ˈhɔːrəfaɪɪŋ/ adjetivo 
  horroroso, horrendo
• horrify / ˈhɔːrəfaɪ / ||/ ˈhɒrɪfaɪ/ verbo transitivo -fies, -fying, -fied horrorizar^(conj.⇒) ;
  she was horrified to find out that … se horrorizó al enterarse de que …
• child /tʃaɪld/ sustantivo (pl children / ˈtʃɪldrən/ )

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