11/08/2012

ASIER: HALLOWEEN LETTER

Hi Julen, 

I didn´t go to the football training on october 31st because i I stayed in Londres in  for halloween. (Halloween is not a place, is it?) I stayed in my grandparents house. We putted (put-put-put) a lot of Jack-o-lanterns all around the house and we bought a lot of candys candies to gave  give for to the children. 


At night children with ideous faces came to our house and said trick or treat. We always said treat but when the all candys were finished we said trick and the children started to broke break all the Jack-o-lanterns. 

Suddenly our house became a haunted house and ghosts,skeletons,witches... appeared in our house. We heared shieking and howling sounds, it was very horrifled horrifying and i suffered a gruesome ________. (gruesome what?) Do you like my day in Londres?

Hope to hear from you soon
Take care, 
Asier 



MR.SANZ COMMENTS


You should improve...
  • Tenses of the letter. If you are writing about a story in the past, you should use the Past Simple
You should learn...
  • gruesome / ˈɡruːsəm/ adjetivo 
    truculentohorripilante
  • gruesome / ˈɡruːsəm/ adjetivo 
    truculentohorripilante


        
    IIvtr fig disfrazar [as, de]: he was dressed up as Napoleon, iba disfrazado de Napoleón
20 POINTS

CONGRATULATIONS!

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